Writing Task2 Lecture 3

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社交媒体的好处是可以让人们更快地*获取信息和新闻

比较逻辑 compare & contrast

Social/digital/new media VS traditional/print media

A. 具像化传统媒体如何一步一步让人们获取信息的

B. 解释新媒体省去或缩短了上述的哪些步骤

【维度1】Whereas traditional media(次), like newspapers, magazines and books 需要花时间印刷,social media没有这个环节(主) - 只要把信息发布到互联网/平台,用户就可以立刻看到

【2】(Additionally, even though) 报纸、杂志和图书被印刷好后(次 - 次),人们也不能立刻看到,还有运输的环节(次 - 主) - 从印刷厂送到报亭newsstands、书店或人们家里,but new media也没有这个环节(主),意味着可以更快传递信息

【3】…去购买或拿

【4】…筛选或查阅信息scanning

Driverless cars are safer.

driverless cars VS cars driven by people

A. List out man-made errors that would cause car accidents

B. How an AI won’t make these errors

【维度1】distracted driving/tendency to multitask while driving + Would an AI be distracted as we people do?

【2】driving under fatigue + Would an AI tire?

【3】driving under the influence of alcohol and drug + Would AI drive under the influence?

【4】delayed reaction

【5】road rage/without emotional control + Would AI road rage? (Once they gain sentience/become sentient, as for now, NO!)

P.s.主次分明:主要信息— independent clause;次要信息 — dependent clause

_. By contrast.(前后同等重要)

VS

If/Although/Because/Due that/When_______(次), _______(主).

_____________(主), which____________(次).

_____________(主), causing that____________(次).

Whereas______________(次), _______________(主).

Compared to/In contrast to/Unlike_______(次), _______(主).

________________(次), but________________(主).

Question Types: Report

(1) Report: cause/effect/solution — 问什么写什么

A. Cause + Solution: *What are the causes*[n.] *of the problem? What measures can be taken to solve it?*

B. Cause + Effect: *Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?*

C. Effect + Solution: What problems can this situation cause*[v.]? How can these problems be solved?*

E.g. Cause + Solution

  • Introduction(抄一遍题目):

  • Body #1(原因): The main cause of…(this problem) is… Another cause is…

  • Body #2(解决方法): The best way for the government to deal with…(this problem) is… Another possible measure that can be taken by the government is…

  • Conclusion: In conclusion, despite…(this problem), the root causes can be tackled by the government with several simple strategies.

Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. Why parents have the reason for doing that? Is that a positive or negative development of children?

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?Conclusion: In conclusion, despite…(this problem), the root causes can be tackled by the government with several simple strategies.

Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed.

Why parents have the reason(the direct basis for sth. happening) for doing that? Is that a positive or negative development of children?

Social media ⬅️Linear reasoning 线性思维!

Young people are more educated than ever; population growth ✅

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries.

Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Economic growth; higher income and more jobs ⬅️False causality 错误的因果关系!

Improved transport; the Internet ✅

Today food travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. (这是全球化其中的一个表现!)

Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Globalization ⬅️Circular reasoning 循环论证!

Improved transport; food preservation ✅

‘*Not kid friendly!*’

In many countries, more and more fathers are staying at home to look after children, while mothers work full-time.

What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative?

the Industrial Revolution

female contraception/prevent pregnancy

In more and more countries, people choose to give money on special occasions rather than giving gifts chosen personally.

Why might this be the case? Is it a positive or a negative development?

The natural resources, such as oil, forests and fresh water, are being consumed at an alarming rate.

What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

  • Body #1

    damage to the environment; conflicts, even wars

  • Body #2

    A. …increase the price of oil OR impose higher taxes on…(like increasing block water tariff) + Although…increase the cost of living/under pressure/bring inconvenience, …reduce the consumption and waste of resources//…friendly to the countries where resources are limited…

    B. The use of alternative energy could be encouraged/…develop seawater purification technology + …invest a lot of money, time and people in developing such technologies, but…most effective method that can tackle the root causes of the problem…

(1) Discuss — 一定要两边

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  • Introduction: It is suggested by some that… Other people believe, however, that…

  • Body #1: Many argue that…because they…

  • Body #2: On the other hand, others say that…since they…

  • Conclusion: In conclusion, I think… (you can support one view or balance the two views)

Homework 思考思路

In many countries today, people are living in a ‘throw-away society’. where things are used in a short time and then thrown away.

What are the causes? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?