写作逻辑的学习
逻辑的学习
文章结构
Introduction
overview
Body paragraphs= key feature/main features + details
Overview
⬆️
Key features ⬅️details
这里的details 和 key features 相当于overview的展开
Overview：
overall, …….
图表作文– 出题者意图
– 图片信息的理解
（动->main trends,静-> 图表信息)
判断 differences/similarities or stages[流程图，地图]
C7p53:
出题者意图:”四种肉的消耗量的变化／main trend”
结论：differences
Overall, the changes in the consumption of four kinds of meat showed significant differences. // there were significant differences in the changes in the consumption of four kinds of meat.// the consumption of four kinds of meat showed different trends
Body paragraphs
Body#1 key feature#1
Fish,beef,lamb的消耗量下降。details [具体如何下降描述+数据]
Body#2 key feature#2
In contrast,鸡肉消耗量上升。+ details […..overtaking ……]+数据
实例
C7p53
Introduction …..
Overall, the changes in the consumption of four kinds of meat showed significant differences.
Fish,beef,lamb的消耗量下降。+Details
In contrast,鸡肉消耗量上升。+ Details
C11p77
Introduction…..
Overall, average carbon dioxide emissions per person showed different trends in four countries from 1967 to 2007. // changes in average carbon dioxide emissions per person showed differences in four countries from 1967 to 2007.
Body#1 key feature#1
In the uk and Sweden, carbon dioxide emissions showed declining trends.
Body#2 key feature#2
However, there was a rise in the emissions in other two countries.
Overall, the changes in the unemployment rate in 9 countries showed considerable/ substantial differences in 1994 and 2004.
The unemployment rate in ……. increased over the period.
On the other hand, the unemployment rate in …..showed dropping trends.
***词汇补充****Upward trend/ downward trend / dropping/ rising/ growing…. trend*
静态图 — comparison + grouping
[comparisons between groups/within groups]
常用-Pattern 模式／结构
学习逻辑
出题者意图：”三个区域的住宅结构／模式”
结论：differences
Overall, the patterns in living places showed differences in three regions in …….
Body#1 key feature#1
Central area –flat是最受欢迎的。+details [comparisons within groups]
Body#2 key feature#2
South area+ north area– house 是主要的居住方式。
“对三个医院的服务的评价／满意度”+differences
(high/low)Level of (patient)satisfaction
C-病人满意度最高
A-病人满意度低一些
B-病人满意度最低
C7p30
尽管五个国家消费模式相似，五个国家消费差距gap不同
Grouping：
Ireland Turkey—消费差距wide gap
其他三个国家–消费差距不明显
C10p77
Destinations of graduates and postgraduates +similarities
Grouping:
Further study was the first choice for graduates.
Postgraduates also preferred further study.
Overview —”…….” showed differences/similarities
Key feature1 city was the most popular in ….the USA was similar to the UK.
Key feature2 majority of people lived in rural areas in …..China and India had similar living pattern.
Key feature1 + key feature 2 => overview
Details1 => key feature1
Details2 => key feature2
C8p53 饼图完成 –按照我们今天逻辑
